Friday, 22 March 2019

The mysterious man
                   
I heard strange noises
in my backyard when
i got home from school.                                             
Hey’ leave me alone i
got terrified till someone
knocked on the door boom
boom boom. I didn't answer
so i left it. It went again boom
boom boom it went again.So
the door opened by itself creek.
I hid in my bedroom.I sore a
mysterious man with a black
scary hat that i’ve never seen before.For some reason he went
he in the house but then he went
to the neighbours
were he kidnapped a person when the mysterious man got back i got out of my bedroom and ran outside to his friend next door… where the mysterious man was. To be continued…..
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous12 April 2019 at 10:14

    Hi Zeke,
    Excellent Job on your story I really like that you used figurative language it really made your story pop!When are you going to make a part 2 of this story? Perhaps next time you could work on your punctuation because I can see allot of lowercase I, But apart from that I really enjoyed this story.

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